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Post by radicalryzen on Mar 7, 2018 6:59:48 GMT
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Post by bigmonmulgrew on Mar 7, 2018 11:13:13 GMT
Can I just say I love the concept of the intro. Theres some cool animations and effects there. That said it is wayyyyyy to long and slow. It took over a min to actaully get to content.
Start off with the first 2-3 being slow, but about twice as fast as they are. Then dramatically increase the speed of the rest.
You need to get to your content in around 10-15 seconds. Anything longer and people will get bored, artisitally I like your intro but it needs to be faster.
Then you skip to part of SW's video. You didn't actaully get to teh meat of teh video until after 2:30, you need to introduce what the meat will be prior to 30sec or people will get bored and leave.
Really like the meat of the video though, made me laugh and made some good points.
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